The
College of Arts and Sciences
Academic Conduct Code
All students
entering Boston University are expected
to maintain high standards of academic honesty
and integrity. It is the responsibility
of every student in the College of Arts
and Sciences to be aware of the Academic
Conduct Code’s contents and to abide
by its provisions. In the College of Arts
and Sciences, the Academic Conduct Committee,
which is composed of students and faculty,
has jurisdiction over all charges of academic
misconduct brought against students.
In all charges
of academic misconduct against a student,
the student is entitled to full procedural
fairness in any disciplinary proceedings.
The Academic Conduct Code details the guidelines
governing disciplinary proceedings. It also
articulates the College’s philosophy
of discipline, defines violations of the
code, and enumerates penalties applicable
under the code.
The attention
of all students is further directed to the
statement in the Undergraduate Programs
Bulletin that, by vote of the College of
Arts and Sciences faculty, the penalty against
CAS students for cheating on examinations
or for plagiarism is expulsion from the
University, or such other penalty as may
be recommended by the Academic Conduct Committee
and subject to approval by the dean.
I
Philosophy of Discipline
The objective
of the College of Arts and Sciences in enforcing
academic rules is to promote a community
atmosphere in which learning can best take
place. Such an atmosphere can be maintained
only so long as every student believes that
his or her academic competence is being
judged fairly and that he or she will not
be put at a disadvantage because of someone
else’s dishonesty. Penalties should
be carefully determined so as to be no more
and no less than required to maintain the
desired atmosphere. In defining violations
of this code, the intent is to protect the
integrity of the educational process.
II
Academic Misconduct
Academic
misconduct is conduct by which a student
misrepresents his or her academic accomplishments,
or impedes other students’ chances
of being judged fairly for their academic
work. Knowingly allowing others to represent
your work as their own is as serious an
offense as submitting another’s work
as your own.
III Violations
of this Code
Violations of
this code comprise of attempts to be dishonest
or deceptive in the performance of academic
work in or out of the classroom, alterations
of academic records, or unauthorized collaboration
with another student or students. Violations
include, but are not limited to:
A. Cheating
on examination. Any attempt by
a student to alter his or her performance
on an examination in violation of that examination’s
stated or commonly understood ground rules.
B. Plagiarism.
Representing the work of another as one’s
own. Plagiarism includes but is not limited
to the following: copying the answers of
another student on an examination, copying
or restating the work or ideas of another
person or persons in any oral or written
work (printed or electronic) without citing
the appropriate source, and collaborating
with someone else in an academic endeavor
without acknowledging his or her contribution.
Plagiarism can consist of acts of commission
– appropriating the words or ideas
of another – or omission – failing
to acknowledge/document/credit the source
or creator of words or ideas (see pp. 10-14
below for a detailed definition of plagiarism).
C. Misrepresentation
or falsification of data presented
for surveys, experiments, etc.
D. Theft
of an examination. Stealing or
otherwise discovering and/or making known
to others the contents of an examination
that has not yet been administered.
E. Unauthorized
communication during examinations.
Any unauthorized communication may be considered
prima facie evidence of cheating.
F. Knowingly
allowing another student to represent your
work as his or her own. This includes
providing a copy of your paper or laboratory
report to another student without the explicit
permission of the instructor(s).
G. Forgery,
alteration, or knowing misuse of graded
examinations, quizzes, grade lists, or official
records or documents, including
but not limited to transcripts, letters
of recommendation, degree certificates,
examinations, quizzes, or other work after
submission.
H. Theft
or destruction of examinations or papers
after submission.
I. Submitting
the same work in more than one course
without the consent of the instructors.
J. Altering
or destroying another student’s work
or records, altering records of
any kind, removing materials from libraries
or offices without consent, or in any way
interfering with the work of others so as
to impede their academic performance.
K. Failure
to comply with the sanctions imposed under
the authority of this code.
IV Faculty
Action
Faculty in the
College of Arts and Sciences who have reason
to believe that a student has violated this
Code shall meet with the student, inform
the student of the suspected violation and
document the student’s response. The
faculty member shall then notify the dean
of the suspected violation and the student’s
response to the alleged violation on the
Form entitled “Report of Academic
Misconduct.”
A. Cases
of Undisputed Academic Misconduct by First-Time
Offenders
If the student
has admitted to the academic misconduct
and has never been found guilty of an academic
conduct violation at Boston University,
the faculty member may request the dean’s
authorization to sanction the student by
means of a grading penalty. In such a case,
a student who has admitted to academic misconduct
may agree to a grading penalty as determined
by the faculty, up to and including a failing
grade in the course. The faculty member
will inform the dean of the proposed grading
penalty.
The dean will
ascertain whether the student has previously
signed a CAS Admission of Academic Misconduct
Form or has any prior record of academic
misconduct in any College or School in the
University. If so, the dean will refer the
charges and supporting evidence to the Academic
Conduct Committee, which shall then proceed
with a hearing. If not, the dean, at his
or her discretion, and taking into account
the nature of the infraction, may grant
written permission to the faculty member
to enter into an agreement with the student
for a grading penalty in lieu of proceedings
before the Academic Conduct Committee.
If such permission
is received, the faculty member will inform
the student of the option to agree to a
grading penalty. If the student chooses
this option, the agreement between the faculty
member and student must be formalized through
the College’s “Admission of
Academic Misconduct” Form. An accused
student is not compelled to sign such an
agreement and may choose to exercise the
right to have his or her case heard by the
Academic Conduct Committee.
B. Cases
of Disputed Academic Misconduct or Cases
of Repeat Offenders
If the student
disputes the charge of Academic Misconduct
or if the dean denies permission for a grading
penalty because the student is a repeat
offender or because of the nature of the
offense, the dean shall then refer the charges
and supporting evidence to the Academic
Conduct Committee, which shall then proceed
with a hearing.
V Penalties
A. Students
Who Sign Approved Admission of Academic
Misconduct Forms
Students who
sign Admission of Academic Misconduct Forms
shall receive the grading penalty noted
on the form. Students will also receive
a letter of reprimand from the dean. The
form and the letter of reprimand will be
retained in the student’s file at
the CAS Dean’s Office, but shall not
be recorded on the student’s permanent
academic record. The reprimand will not
be made public when records or transcripts
are sent out. It may, however, be considered
when imposing sanctions for future offenses.
B. Students
Whose Cases are Referred to the Committee
Students who
are not allowed the option of a grading
penalty or who elect to have their cases
heard by the Academic Conduct Committee
may receive the sanctions of Reprimand,
Disciplinary Probation, Suspension, or Expulsion
only through action of the Academic Conduct
Committee. For cases referred to the Academic
Conduct Committee, students may be penalized
for academic conduct violations only through
action of the Committee. However, faculty
members always retain the right to assign
grades reflecting their principled and equitable
assessment of students’ work. In a
case in which the Academic Conduct Committee
has found a violation of the Code, the grade
assigned by the faculty member may also
reflect the faculty member’s determination
of how seriously overall course goals and
expectations of the academic discipline
are compromised by work involved in an incident
of academic misconduct, and how that work
should in consequence contribute to the
final course grade.
C. Students
who believe that a faculty member has penalized
them for alleged acts of academic misconduct
without having followed the procedures
set forth in this Code should make their
concerns known as soon as possible to the
dean.
D. If
the accused is found guilty by the Committee,
the following penalties may be imposed:
1. No
penalty for minor violations that do not
warrant sanction.
2. Reprimand
a. For violations
of a minor nature or mitigated by extenuating
circumstances.
b. A copy of the reprimand shall be placed
in the student’s file but shall not
be recorded on the permanent academic record.
Past reprimands may be considered in imposing
sanctions for future offenses.
c. Reprimands are not to be made public
when records, transcripts, etc., are sent
out.
d. Reprimands place no restriction on the
student’s participation in academic
or nonacademic College or all-University
activities.
3. Disciplinary
probation
a. For violations
deemed serious enough to warrant some abridgment
of the student’s rights and privileges.
b. Given for a specified period of time.
c. Recorded on the student’s permanent
internal record.
d. Prohibits the student from being an officer
in any recognized all-University or College
student organization, and from participating
in intercollegiate activities during the
specified probation period.
4. Suspension
a. For violations
deemed serious enough to warrant separation
of the student from the University community
for a limited time, but not serious enough
to warrant expulsion.
b. Given for a period of one to three semesters.
c. Recorded on the student’s permanent
internal record; the student’s external
record shall carry the statement "withdrawn."
d. The student must apply to the Dean of
Arts and Sciences for readmission, making
a satisfactory statement concerning his
or her interim activities and his or her
intended future conduct.
e. No academic coursework may be undertaken
for Boston University credit, nor may any
Boston University degree be conferred, during
the period of suspension.
5. Expulsion
a. For extremely
serious academic misconduct.
b. Recorded permanently on the student’s
academic record.
c. Expulsion is permanent.
6. Other
sanctions
a. For fraudulent
use of College transcripts or degree certificates,
or similar serious misconduct, recommendation
of the committee may include withholding
of transcripts or revocation of the degree.
VI Dissemination
of Information
A. Notice of
probation, suspension, or expulsion is sent
to the parent or guardian of dependent students.
B. Dissemination
of information is governed by the Family
Educational Rights and Privacy Act of 1974.
Copies of this act are available in the
University Registrar’s Office.
C. Penalties
imposed through the Academic Conduct Code
may be reported to graduate and professional
schools to which a student seeks admission.
D. Efforts will
be made to ensure that students receive
a copy of the Academic Conduct Code at their
first registration in the College. Copies
of the code will also be available in the
College of Arts and Sciences Academic Advising
Office, CAS Room 105.
Student
Academic Conduct Committee
I Procedure
A.
Proceedings before the committee
are instituted when the dean forwards the
complainant’s report to the chair
of the committee. The committee shall
consist of faculty members appointed
by the Dean of Arts and Sciences and
undergraduate students of not lower than
junior-year standing, appointed by the
associate dean of the College. This committee
has jurisdiction over every alleged act
of academic misconduct on the part of
(a) any student enrolled in the College
of Arts and Sciences, and (b) any student
enrolled in a course taught in the College,
whether that student is enrolled in the
College or some other School at this
University or any other college or university.
The committee will also have jurisdiction
over every alleged act of misconduct
pertaining to documents of or course
credits earned in the College by any
person. This shall include any person
who has received a baccalaureate degree
from this University.
B.
Faculty in the College of Arts and Sciences
shall, after discussing the matter with
the student in question, notify the dean
of any documented violation of the code.
The notification shall include the student’s
name and I.D. number, the course in which
the alleged violation occurred, and a statement
indicating any and all supporting evidence
upon which the professor has relied. (See
Section IV: Faculty Action, above).
C. If
the dean refers the case to the Academic
Conduct Committee, the dean’s
office shall inform the student (by hand-delivered
or certified letter with return receipt,
to be sent at least twelve days prior to
the hearing) of the following matters:
1. The charges.
2. The date,
time, and location of the hearing.
3. The fact that
the student may request to reschedule the
hearing for a valid reason.
4. The fact
that the student may be accompanied by
an advisor of his or her choice, who may
be an attorney. At the discretion of the
committee chair, the advisor may be allowed
to make a brief statement on behalf of
the student. The advisor may not participate
directly in the hearing.
5. The fact
that he or she shall have the right to
examine the person bringing the charges,
to have access to all documents that have
been introduced as evidence, to have copies
prepared, and at the discretion of the
chair and in a manner to be prescribed
by the chair, to examine all witnesses.
D. Hearings
1. Members of
the committee shall be excused if the case
might involve a conflict of interest (e.g.,
kinship, teacher-student relationship, etc.).
2. The dean may
appoint pro tempore members to replace regular
faculty members who are unable to attend,
or who have been excused.
3. A representative
from the home College of any non-CAS student
shall be invited to attend, but will not
vote.
4. No student
shall be found guilty except on the vote
of a majority of the voting members present
at a hearing.
5. The quorum
for hearings shall be five voting members
of the committee, at least three of whom
shall be faculty members.
6. The chair
shall be counted as a voting member, but
shall cast his or her vote only in order
to break a tie vote.
7. A hearing
shall proceed in the absence of the accused
student only if:
a. The student waives the right to be present
or
b. The committee is satisfied that proper
notice of the hearing was given to the student
and that there is no legitimate cause for
the absence.
8. The hearing
shall be recorded either by a stenographer
or by sound recording. The records are to
be preserved for one year. Any participant
in the hearing may obtain a copy of the
recording or the transcript of the hearing
at actual cost.
9. The order
of the hearing shall be as follows:
a. Presentation of charges by the committee
chair.
b. Presentation and examination of material
evidence and witnesses by the committee
and by the accused student(s) but excluding
material relevant to sanctions to be imposed.
In appropriate circumstances the chair
may take steps to protect a witness through
actions such as sequestering, withholding
a witness’s identity, or taking testimony
prior to a hearing.
c. Statement by the accused student.
d. After excusing the accused student, and
advisor, and witnesses, deliberation of
the committee.
e. Formulation of the judgment and assessment
of any appropriate penalty by a majority
vote of the members present.
10. The chair
shall make the necessary determination of
the scope of the inquiry with a view to
according full and fair exploration of relevant
material.
11. Because the
hearing is not a court hearing, the committee
is not bound by legal rules of evidence.
However, every effort will be made to conduct
hearings as fairly and expeditiously as
possible.
12. The hearing
shall not be public, and information gained
at the hearing shall be treated as privileged
information by all participants. This does
not bar the disclosure of the findings and
recommendations of the committee to those
authorized to receive such information.
Inasmuch as this provision is for the protection
of the accused, it does not bar him or her
from disclosing the proceedings, if he or
she wishes to do so.
13. At the request
of the accused student, the chair of the
Academic Conduct Committee may, at his
or her discretion, elect to admit parents
or legal guardians and may, at his or her
discretion, allow a brief statement on
behalf of the student by a parent or legal
guardian.
14. The hearing
shall be conducted with proper decorum.
The hearing may be recessed by the chaiir
if:
a. Additional evidence or witnesses are
needed.
b. It is apparent that a fair hearing cannot
be held because of disturbances, illness,
or similar causes.
15. The College
may, from time to time, make public the
facts and decisions of cases that come before
the committee. However, such reports shall
not reveal the name of any student, professor,
or course involved in a case that has been
heard by the committee.
E. Recommendation
The complete
recommendations, including a statement of
the charges, evidence, and judgment, shall
be transmitted to the dean as soon as possible
after the hearing at which the judgment
was made. The dean shall review the report
and the appropriateness of the recommended
sanctions. The dean may refer the matter
to the committee for further consideration
and/or elaboration, or may request the transcript
or recording of the hearing and/or the evidence.
However, the factual findings of the committee
shall not be replaced by findings more damaging
to the student unless the dean has submitted
new evidence for a rehearing. Similarly,
the dean shall not impose more severe sanctions
than those recommended by the committee.
In the case of non-CAS students, the dean
shall transmit recommendations to the dean
of the student’s college. In the event
that the dean of said college shall deviate
substantially from the recommendations of
the Dean of Arts and Sciences, the latter
may, upon the recommendation of the Student
Academic Conduct Committee, and after consulting
with the dean of the other college, prohibit
the student in question from taking courses
in the College of Arts and Sciences for
a period of time that shall reflect the
intent of the original recommendation.
F. The
dean shall notify the student by certified
letter of the judgment and penalty imposed
and that such findings and sanctions are
subject to final review by the provost after
all appeals within the College have been
exhausted. The letter shall also inform
the student that there is a procedure for
appeal.
In the case of
non-CAS students, appeals with respect to
the judgment shall be filed through CAS;
appeals with respect to the penalty shall
be filed through the student’s college.
In the event that a student appeals both
the judgment and the penalty, the appeal
should first go through CAS and then through
the student’s college.
II Appeals
A. Within two
weeks of the receipt of the dean’s
final response to appeals within the College,
a student may appeal the judgment or the
penalty to the provost. Appeals are to be
in writing, setting forth the basis of the
appeal and whether the student is appealing
the judgment, the penalty, or both.
B. The provost
shall review the documentation or refer
the appeal to the committee for clarification
and comments.
C. Normally,
a rehearing will be ordered only if new
evidence is presented. The procedure at
a rehearing is the same as described above
in section I.D.9.
D. After the
hearing, a recommendation to the provost
is to be made, as described in section I.E.
(“Recommendation”), above.
E. Before making
a decision, the provost may conduct his
or her own investigation if he or she feels
it is warranted.
III Non-CAS
Violations
When CAS students
are called before academic conduct committees
of another College in the University:
A. A CAS representative
should be present at the hearing and deliberations.
The dean of the school or college holding
the hearing shall inform the dean of CAS
of the nature of the charge and the time
of the hearing.
B. After such
hearing, the dean shall review the report
and judgment and, at his or her discretion,
may refer the case to the Academic Conduct
Committee. Unless special problems are apparent
that should be discussed by the committee,
the dean shall reach a judgment and assess
an appropriate penalty.
C. The CAS student
shall be notified in the same manner as
specified in section I.F., but a copy of
the letter should be sent to the dean of
the College in which the original hearing
was held.
D. Within two
weeks of the receipt of the dean’s
letter, a student may appeal the judgement
or penalty to the provost. Appeals are to
be in writing, setting forth the basis of
the appeal and whether the student is appealing
the judgement, the penalty, or both.
IV Request
for Reinstatement
Requests for
reinstatement after suspension shall be
made no sooner than ten weeks and no later
than eight weeks before the proposed date
of readmission. In the case of readmission,
a student is normally placed on disciplinary
probation during the first semester of his
or her return and removed from probation
at the end of the term. The student seeking
reinstatement shall inform the dean of his
or her activities during the time of suspension,
indicate what steps have been taken to satisfy
any conditions imposed during the time of
suspension, and state his or her future
academic plans.
V. Reporting
and Documenting Procedures
All evidence
must be carefully documented in accordance
with the guidelines set forth below:
A. The person
originating the charges shall present them
in writing, accompanied by suitable exhibits,
to the Office of the Dean. That person shall
make himself or herself available to the
dean for prehearing conferences if necessary,
and shall appear at or be available for
the Student Academic Conduct hearing whenever
possible.
B. Witnesses
to the alleged infraction of the Student
Academic Conduct Code may be requested to
file a report on the incident and shall
make themselves available for prehearing
conferences and Student Academic Conduct
hearings.
C. The following
are the guidelines for obtaining evidence
of violations of the Student Academic Conduct
Code in connection with:
1. Examinations.
If an irregularity occurs during an examination,
the person who originally notes the irregularity
should attempt to have his or her observations
corroborated by others who are also in the
room (e.g., proctors). The person(s) making
the report shall provide specific information
such as the time of the observation, type
of irregularity observed, number of times
it took place, exactly which sections of
the examination were affected by the infraction,
the name of each individual participating
in the irregularity, and the extent of participation
by each individual.
2. Papers
and Reports. If the misconduct
is inferred from the appearance and/or content
of a paper or other assignment where the
professor or proctor has had no chance to
observe the actual process, specific reference
should be made to each section that gives
evidence of misconduct. Where possible,
copies of pertinent sections and copies
of any other pertinent material (original
sources from which section or sections were
allegedly plagiarized, and so on) should
be submitted with the report to the dean.
3. Other
types of academic misconduct. Reports
should be prepared using the same rules
of careful observation and accurate documentation
as outlined above.
D. The Dean of
Arts and Sciences will be responsible for:
Investigating
the charges.
Convening the
hearing when appropriate.
Administering
other procedures which may be required by
the finding of the investigation.
A Definition
of Plagiarism
The following
definition of plagiarism is taken from H.
Martin and R. Ohmann’s The Logic and
Rhetoric of Exposition, revised edition,
Holt, Rinehart and Winston, 1963.
“The academic
counterpart of the bank embezzler and of
the manufacturer who mislabels products
is the plagiarist, the student or scholar
who leads readers to believe that what they
are reading is the original work of the
writer when it is not. If it could be assumed
that the distinction between plagiarism
and honest use of sources is perfectly clear
in everyone’s mind, there would be
no need for the explanation that follows;
merely the warning with which this definition
concludes would be enough. But it is apparent
that sometimes people of goodwill draw the
suspicion of guilt upon themselves (and,
indeed, are guilty) simply because they
are not aware of the illegitimacy of certain
kinds of "borrowing" and of the
procedures for correct identification of
materials other than those gained through
independent research and reflection. . .
.
“The spectrum
is a wide one. At one end there is a word-for-word
copying of another’s writing without
enclosing the copied passage in quotation
marks and identifying it in a footnote,
both of which are necessary. (This includes,
of course, the copying of all or any part
of another student’s paper.) It hardly
seems possible that anyone of college age
or more could do that without clear intent
to deceive. At the other end there is the
almost casual slipping in of a particularly
apt term which one has come across in reading
and which so admirably expresses one’s
opinion that one is tempted to make it personal
property. Between these poles there are
degrees and degrees, but they may be roughly
placed in two groups. Close to outright
and blatant deceit -- but more the result,
perhaps, of laziness than of bad intent
-- is the patching together of random jottings
made in the course of reading, generally
without careful identification of their
source, and then woven into the text, so
that the result is a mosaic of other people’s
ideas and words, the writer’s sole
contribution being the cement to hold the
pieces together. Indicative of more effort
and, for that reason, somewhat closer to
honest, though still dishonest, is the paraphrase,
an abbreviated (and often skillfully prepared)
restatement of someone else’s analysis
or conclusion, without acknowledgment that
another person’s text has been the
basis for the recapitulation.”
Examples
of Plagiarism
[From
H. Martin and R. Ohmann, The Logic and Rhetoric
of Exposition, revised edition, Holt, Rinehart
and Winston, 1963.]
The examples
given below should distinguish between dishonest
and the proper use of source material. If
instances occur which these examples do
not seem to serve as a model, conscience
will, in all likelihood, be prepared to
supply advice.
The
Source
"The importance
of the Second Treatise of Government printed
in this volume is such that without it we
would miss some of the familiar features
of our own government. It is safe to assert
that the much criticized branch known as
the Supreme Court obtained its being as
a result of Locke’s insistence upon
the separation of powers; and that the combination
of many powers in the hands of the executive
under the New Deal has still to encounter
opposition because it is contrary to the
principles enunciated therein, the effect
of which is not spent, though the relationship
may not be consciously traced. Again we
see the crystallizing force of Locke’s
writing. It renders explicit and adapts
to the British politics of this day the
trend and aim of writers from Languet and
Bodin through Hooker and Grotius, to say
nothing of the distant ancients, Aristotle
and the Stoic School of natural law. It
sums up magistrally the arguments used through
the ages to attack authority vested in a
single individual, but it does so from the
particular point of view engendered by the
Revolution of 1688 and is in harmony with
the British scene and mental climate of
the growing bourgeoisie of that age. Montesquieu
and Rousseau, the framers of our own Declaration
of Independence, and the statesmen (or should
we say merchants and speculators?) who drew
up the Constitution have re-echoed its claims
for human liberty, for the separation of
powers, for the sanctity of private property.
In the hands of these it has been the quarry
of liberal doctrines; and that it has served
the Socialist theory of property based on
labor is final proof of its breadth of view."
Charles L. Sherman,
"Introduction" to John Locke,
Treatise of Civil Government and A Letter
Concerning Toleration
1. Word-for-Word Plagiarizing
"It is not hard to see
the importance of the Second Treatise of
Government to our own democracy. Without
it we would miss some of the most familiar
features of our own government. It is safe
to assert that the much criticized branch
known as the Supreme Court obtained its
being as a result of Locke’s insistence
upon the separation of powers; and that
the combination of many powers in the hands
of the executive is contrary to the principles
enunciated therein, the effect of which
is not spent, though the relationship may
not be consciously traced. The framers of
our own Declaration of Independence and
the statesman who drew up the Constitution
have re-echoed its claims for human liberty,
for the separation of powers, for the sanctity
of private property. All these are marks
of influence of Locke’s Second Treatise
on our own way of life."
In this example, after composing
half of the first sentence, the writer copies
exactly what is in the original text, leaving
out the center section of the paragraph
and omitting the names of Montesquieu and
Rousseau where he takes up the text again.
The last sentence is also the writer’s
own.
If the writer had enclosed
all the copied text in quotation marks and
had identified the source in a footnote,
he would not have been liable to the charge
of plagiarism; a reader might justifiably
have felt, however, that the writer’s
personal contribution to the discussion
was not very significant.
2. The Mosaic
"The crystallizing force
of Locke’s writing may be seen in
the effect his Second Treatise of Government
had in shaping some of the familiar features
of our own government. That much criticized
branch known as the Supreme Court and the
combination of many powers in the hands
of the executive under the New Deal are
modern examples. But even the foundation
of our state -- the Declaration of Independence
and the Constitution -- have re-echoed its
claims for human liberty, for the separation
of powers, for the sanctity of private property.
True, the influence of others is also marked
in our Constitution -- from the trend and
aim of writers like Languet and Bodin, Hooker
and Grotius to say nothing of Aristotle
and the Stoic school of natural law; but
the fundamental influence is Locke’s
Treatise, the very quarry of liberal doctrines."
Note how the following phrases
have been lifted out of the original text
and moved into new patterns:
"crystallizing force
of Locke’s writing"
"some of the familiar
features of our own government"
"much criticized branch
known as the Supreme Court"
"combination of many
powers in the hands of the executive under
the New Deal"
"have re-echoed its claims
for human liberty . . . property"
"from the trend and aim
. . . Grotius"
"to say nothing of Aristotle
and . . . natural law"
"quarry of liberal doctrines"
As in the first example,
there is really no way of legitimizing such
a procedure. To put every stolen phrase
within quotation marks would produce an
almost unreadable, and quite worthless,
text.
3. The Paraphrase
Paraphrase
"Many fundamental aspects of our
own government are apparent in the Second
Treatise of Government. One can
safely say that the oft-censured Supreme
Court really owes its existence to the
Lockean demand that powers in government
be kept separate; equally one can say
that the allocation of varied and widespread
authority to the President during the
era of the New Deal has still to encounter
opposition because it is contrary to
the principles enunciated therein...
Once more it is possible to note the
way in which Locke’s writing clarified
existing opinion." |
Original
"Many familiar features of our
own government are apparent in the Second
Treatise of Government. It is safe
to assert that the much criticized...Court
obtained its existence upon separation
of powers; and that the combination
of many powers in the hands of the executive
under the New Deal has still to encounter
opposition because it is contrary to
the principles enunciated therein...
Again we see the crystallizing force
of Locke’s writing." |
The preceding comparison shows
how the writer has simply traveled along
with the original text, substituting approximately
equivalent terms except where his or her
understanding falters, as it does with “crystallizing,”
or where the ambiguity of the original requires
too much ingenuity to decipher, as it apparently
does as in "to encounter opposition
... consciously traced" in the original.
Such a procedure has its
uses; for one thing, it is of value to the
reader. How, then, may it properly be used?
The writer might begin the second sentence
with "As Sherman notes in the introduction
to his edition of the Treatise, one can
safely say . . . " and conclude the
paraphrase passage with a footnote giving
the additional identification necessary.
Or he or she might indicate directly the
exact nature of what is being done, in this
fashion: "To paraphrase Sherman’s
comment . . . " and conclude that also
with a footnote indicator.
In point of fact, this course
of action does not particularly lend itself
to honest paraphrase, with the exception
of that one sentence, which the paraphraser
above copied without change except for abridgment.
The purpose of paraphrase would be to simplify,
or to throw new and significant light on
a text; it requires much skill if it is
to be used honestly, and should be used
rarely by the student except for the purpose,
as suggested above, of personal enlightenment.
4. The "Apt"
Term
"The Second Treatise
of Government is a veritable quarry of liberal
doctrines. In it the crystallizing force
of Locke’s writing is markedly apparent.
The cause of human liberty, the principle
of separation of powers, and the inviolability
of private property -- all three major dogmas
of American constitutionalism -- owe their
presence in our Constitution in large part
to the remarkable Treatise which first appeared
around 1685 and was destined to spark within
three years a revolution in the land of
its author’s birth and, ninety years
later, another revolution against that land."
Here the writer has not been
able to resist the appropriation of two
striking terms -- "quarry of liberal
doctrines" and "crystallizing
force"; a perfectly proper use of the
terms would have required only the addition
of a phrase: "The Second Treatise of
Government is, to use Sherman’s suggestive
expression, a "quarry of liberal doctrines."
In it the "crystallizing force"
-- the term again is Sherman’s --
of Locke’s writing is markedly apparent."
Other phrases in the text
above -- "the cause of human liberty,"
"the principle of the separation of
powers," "the inviolability of
private property" -- are clearly drawn
directly from the original source, but are
so much matters in the public domain, so
to speak, that no one could reasonably object
to their reuse in this fashion.
Since one of the principal
aims of a college education is the development
of intellectual honesty, it is obvious that
plagiarism is a particularly serious offense,
and the punishment for it is commensurately
severe. What a penalized student suffers
can never really be known by anyone except
that student. The student who plagiarizes
and "gets away with it" suffers
something less public, and probably less
acute, but the corruptness of the act, the
disloyalty and baseness it entails, must
inevitably leave a mark on him or her, as
well as on the institution.
5. Making a Bibliography
or Works Cited Page; Using Footnotes
[Adapted from H. Martin and
R. Ohmann, The Logic and Rhetoric of Exposition,
revised edition, Holt, Rinehart and Winston,
1963.]
Documenting Sources
Essays written for college courses generally
require the use of sources: books,
periodicals, internet sites, and other documents
containing information relevant to the topic
of the essay to be written. Such sources
are both documented within the essay, as
either footnotes or parenthetical citations,
and appended to the essay, in either a works
cited page or a bibliography.
Very simply, a bibliography
lists all the books, periodicals, internet
sources, and other documents the writer
looked at to prepare the essay, whereas
the works cited page lists only the material
the writer actually used to write the essay;
a footnote or a parenthetical citation indicates
very precisely the source of a quotation,
specific statement, or idea occurring in
the text of the essay. For all such documentation,
standardized systems have been developed
so that readers anywhere can turn quickly
from the footnote or parenthetical citation
to the works cited or bibliographical listing
to find the proper source for the material
at hand. The three most frequently used
formats are derived from the Publication
Manual of the American Psychological Association
(APA), the Modern Language Association Handbook
for Writer’s of Research Papers (MLA),
and The Chicago Manual of Style.
Students are obligated to
discover and adhere to the citation format
sanctioned by the faculty, course or department
for which the essay is undertaken.
Just as honesty requires quotation
marks around any statement copied directly
from a written or electronic source, it
requires a footnote or a parenthetical citation
to indicate the place from which information,
ideas, or paraphrased reconstructions have
been gathered and utilized in the text.
A fine bibliography or works
cited page and careful citation, no matter
how ably prepared, will not make up for
the deficiency in reasoning, style, and
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